Collage by CreatingPoetry

CreatingPoetry


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okay, part one, here we go šŸ˜‚
let me just start by saying that I think we write kind of similarly, so itā€™s super hard for me to come up with constructive feedback because itā€™s like trying to find out whatā€™s wrong with something I wrote, and if I knew that then I would be better at writing. you know what Iā€™m saying? šŸ˜‚ anyway, loving it so far, super intrigued by these characters
I just love the imagery of them sitting in the grass in the moonlight
Iā€™m not sure that her reaction to ā€œyou need to leaveā€ is super fitting. of course, I donā€™t know any details of the situation yet, but it seems like him saying that made her relax when I would imagine it having the opposite effect
ahh ā€œlook at me and tell me you donā€™t love meā€ IM INVESTED NOW!
(excuse me if I wrongly assumed genders here)